Gideon Blue

STAR - New Demo

Ah - always a bugger when you get mixed feedback on the song particularly when its around the vocals - not strong enough / weak/ strained. 

I had got some feedback from professional critics and it was a mixed bag from good to not so good. However deep down I had not been that totally happy or convinced.

This had also come on the back off some songwriting lessons at  http://www.londonsongcompany.com where was told to keep trying new things until it worked, son't just try and work around with small fixes when the underlying melody was struggling.

So I have worked on STAR and have a version that I think has really improved, particularly around the Chorus. 

Its time for you to let me know 'old or new'.

 

Gid

 

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