Gideon Blue

STAR - New Demo

Ah - always a bugger when you get mixed feedback on the song particularly when its around the vocals - not strong enough / weak/ strained. 

I had got some feedback from professional critics and it was a mixed bag from good to not so good. However deep down I had not been that totally happy or convinced.

This had also come on the back off some songwriting lessons at where was told to keep trying new things until it worked, son't just try and work around with small fixes when the underlying melody was struggling.

So I have worked on STAR and have a version that I think has really improved, particularly around the Chorus. 

Its time for you to let me know 'old or new'.




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